Michelle Fournier
"Don't ever diminish the power of words. Words move hearts and hearts move limbs." -Hamza Yusuf
It’s no secret adoption decisions are largely rooted in emotion. According to a PetHealth and APPA survey with 10,000 responders, the love of animals is what drove 70% of people to take action and adopt a pet. With emotional decisions words matter and have a magnifying effect on how adopters perceive your animals.
For example, it has been proven that a bio description along with a clear call to action can directly influence people’s decisions to adopt. According to the survey, the most effective messages highlight available animals, had a positive spin, and had a clear call to action.
Writing a positive message resonates much better than a straight plea. In the example below, 63% responded more favorably to the second message over the first:
- We are running out of space! Come adopt a pet so we don’t have to euthanize animals; OR
- We have so many great animals, that we are running out of space! Come adopt a pet today!
Small changes to language can go a long way towards positively impacting the success rates of adoptions. In the below example, by simply including a reference to “love”, 10% of survey respondents favored the message which can lead to an action taken.
- Lucky was hit by a car and lost her leg and left eye. She needs a home quick! Adopt a pet today!; OR
- Lucky was hit by a car and lost her leg and left eye. She has a lot of love to give and need a new home quick! Adopt a pet today!
When creating messages specifically to drive a call to action, focus on these three key points:
- Health of the pet
- Specific endearing traits or characteristics
- A reminder of the life-saving nature of the adoption.
Remain positive, be descriptive, and celebrate the successful connections you create!
If you like this, please share it!
Submit a Comment